Comments for Ringo

Comment on Animal experimentation by rane

rane — Thu, 29 Nov 2007 23:11:43 +0000

Opponents also claim that human being has always used animal for human being during centuries, so there is nothing wrong with animal experimentation. They said that animal experimentation is same as eating animal that people usually do. I think that it needs ethical contemplation. Stocks such as cow, pig, and chicken are animals which human being used to eat for living during centuries. That is why people blame on eating dogs, monkeys, and some animals which people usually eat. Furthermore, we do not need to give a pain to animal to get useless and dangerous results.

I think you’d better revise this BP

Comment on Animal experimentation by rane

rane — Thu, 29 Nov 2007 23:02:11 +0000

it is a good essay, however, some supports are not strong enough.

Comment on Benefits of recycling by chao

chao — Tue, 13 Nov 2007 22:38:11 +0000

Sorry, I don’t know where to leave a comment, so I just leave here. The professor’s name is Timothy Finegan. Never choosing his lecture. Also, I need lots of time to work on his assignments. It’s not because we are too old. The reason is the professor is too “st~~d”. You know what I mean? Haha, by the way, how is your cps100

Comment on Benefits of recycling by Steve

Steve — Mon, 29 Oct 2007 23:54:05 +0000

Hey Ringo, I agree that recycling is important and recycle everything I can at home. However, many Americans believe that the materials we send for recycling don’t get recycled; they wind up in landfills anyway. I wish there was some way to know what really happens to the things I recycle.

Your blog is cool-looking, but you haven’t added any content in almost a month! What’s up with that?

Comment on Journal Assignment #1-1 by Maya

Maya — Sat, 27 Oct 2007 05:40:33 +0000

You saw the movie “To kill a mocking bird” and write about it? What is the movie about? I know that is a very famous movie but I never have the “motive” to watch it…..

Comment on Journal Assignment #1-3 by Maya

Maya — Thu, 25 Oct 2007 03:36:25 +0000

I’m sure it’s hard for most of people to keep a diary, too. I tried so many times to try to keep a diary but of course, didn’t last long….but now when I read those old diaries (maybe not diary, more like weekly or monthly), some of the small things happened that I don’t even remember came back to me. It’s kind of fun to read your own old diary and to realize how “young” you were.

Comment on Journal #2 – Cause/Effect Prewriting by mike

mike — Tue, 02 Oct 2007 20:00:54 +0000

Your topic is very interesting. I think you already recognize advantages and disadvantages of big size class. But you need to give us more detail about that situation. Anyway i like your prewriting…

Comment on Journal #2 – Cause/Effect Prewriting by bona

bona — Thu, 27 Sep 2007 19:05:55 +0000

I think your topic is very interesting. you seems that you know advantage and disadvantage of small class well. you need to expand your supporting in body paragraph well though, i like your prewriting

Comment on Journal #2 – Cause/Effect Prewriting by Steve

Steve — Wed, 26 Sep 2007 02:27:15 +0000

This is a popular topic, Ringo. It is interesting, but you will have to think carefully about all the possible effects of smaller class sizes.

Comment on Journal Assignment #1-4 by Steve

Steve — Thu, 06 Sep 2007 17:32:33 +0000

That’s a great goal! We will practice timed writing in class, but remember that you can give yourself a 30-minute timed writing exercise at any time. Here is a webpage with tons of topics: http://unrestrictedarea.com/esl/compositiontopics.html